so i did write a new section while i had a study session in biology since i was done with my study guide.
but i didn't like it.
yet i showed it to sky while complaining about how i didn't like it.
and he said i should just post it. so i decided just now that i might as well.
to catch up on other posts go here.
now, without further ado, part six.
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so what do you think?
am i insane for not liking it?
or should i rewrite this part completely?
or do you have any ideas for the next part?
peace, love, and gummybears.
well, i thought it was good :D but you're probably not insane (although maybe close to it since you don't like it)XD
ReplyDeleteOMG!! YAYAYAYAYYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!! I'M IN THE STORY!!!!
ReplyDeleteHaha, I'm a racecar driving.. librarian? Or no? Oh, well- I DRIVE A RACECAR! :) Haha, thank you Gummy :D
I like it because I'm in it :D Thank you again!!
i'm in it! :) i was reading then i saw "AMARANTHA!" i was like "hey. it's me." :)
ReplyDeletei like it :)
so you ditch us to get a new set of friends. I see how it is. :D
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ReplyDeletewhy thank you!
@bruce
why yes you are in it. i meant the librarian commment to be at amarantha because of the whole 'she went to the east coast to look for books' thing. i am trying to portray you more as an author, but i'll get more into that later.
2amarantha
thanks! i finally found a good place to add more characters. and i can add even more due to the fact that there is the whole crowd thing. i like the opporunity i left, if not the writing.
@sky
i'll come back for you guys eventually. i mean, i don't think i could live with myself if i let you and hannah rip each other to shreds and kill kevin in the process.
I think it would be better if Sky rips Hannah to shreads only. Maybe Kevin would be scared of our fighting and run off and be mauled by a bear, because I know I would NEVER kill the sweet little Kevin...:)
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